Hi Jenny,

We know how much thought goes into the way Winchester College communicates. From celebrating 643 years of history, to opening conversations about deep thinking, critical creativity, and intellectual stamina—you don’t just market a school, you defend an idea of what education should be.

But here’s the challenge: in a world of skim-reads and identical scrolls, even the most thoughtful message can blur into sameness.

That’s not a criticism—it’s a pattern. After reviewing 100+ live school campaigns, the majority follow the same digital rhythm: same structure, same claims, same cadence.

So we’ve built something simple. A mirror. A moment of reflection.

If you passed your current adverts mid-scroll, would it sound like Winchester College? Would it feel like something only you could have said?

Winchester in the Wild

What’s Working

✅ Message consistency:

The messaging stays laser-focused across all versions:

“Academically ambitious girls and boys… supported by inspirational subject specialists… prepared for top universities… empowered to make a difference.”

That aligns with Winchester’s academic reputation and avoids marketing hyperbole. It’s trustworthy.

Strategic use of voice:

The ad featuring a calm, thoughtful speaker in a home-like setting creates emotional permission to pause and listen — which is rare on fast-scroll platforms.

✅ Heritage meets evolution:

The phrase “for the first time in our 643-year history” is powerful. It signals evolution, not disruption. This is co-education as considered growth, not trend-chasing. That framing is exactly right for Winchester’s community.

These are your current Meta adverts, let’s look at them through a parent’s eyes.

What’s Getting Lost:

🔁 Same old script:

Terms like “Academically ambitious” sounds reassuring — but is also generic.

👉 When we searched Meta’s Ad Library, we found over 21 schools all using the exact same phrase (especially for Sixth-form)

Without being too cringy - this causes something called paradox of choice. When every option looks the same, people don’t feel empowered. They feel overwhelmed. So they scroll past, not because they didn’t like what they saw, but because nothing stood out.

🔁 Repetition without personalisation:

Each ad is nearly identical — same copy, same structure, just swapped visuals. But audiences see more than one ad. Without slight narrative variation or emotional build (e.g. showing a pupil story, a teacher insight, or a campus moment), it begins to blur.

Our recommendation: build a three-part series across placements, mapping to different parent mindsets (e.g. “Why Co-Ed Now?”, “Academic Stretch”, “Life at Sixth”). Same CTA, more emotional dimension.

💧 Auto Placements = Blended Results, Diluted Strategy

Currently, these ads are set to automatic placements across Meta’s network — meaning they’re showing on Facebook Marketplace, Reels, Audience Network, even Messenger.

But here’s the truth from our testing across 70+ independent schools:

98% of quality engagement happens on Facebook and Instagram Feeds.

When ads run in Stories or Audience Network, costs rise and click intent drops.

What I'd Tweak And Why...